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A strong slow pulse drives these dragons


By John Clute

Finally, after a hundred pages or so, at the beginning of a story called "Stride," there is a clue. Up to that point, the tales assembled in The Dragons of Springplace had somehow seemed too private to live with.

It wasn't a question of Robert Reed's professionalism. Indeed, he seems almost doctrinaire in the strictness of his adherence to good storytelling rules; in the sober and seemly way he fits character to theme, input to outcome. He paces infodump to a nicety. He knows all the stuff it is possible to learn from writing workshops. He is a pro. He gives good value. He writes a lot.

But in the end this did not help.

In the end--for several novels, and for the hundred pages or so of the solid sensible tough-minded competent collection on review before "Stride" began--it was impossible, for this reviewer, to feel comfortable with the pulse of any single tale. The ostensible point of each story--neatly unpacked before the eye--somehow never seemed to unlock the heart of whatever was going on.

Each story was jogging to a mute daemon.

Here is how "Stride" begins:

Phillip finds himself awake, finds himself running, midstride and charging hard down the left rut of a little ranch road; and he stops and turns, and turns, confusion becoming panic and someone close uttering a shrill moan. Then he realizes that he's moaning. Nobody else is here. And he shuts his mouth, feeling dizzy and weak and wondering:

Where is this?

And suddenly it was clear. Not that it was exactly a secret--the bio on the flap of this very collection says of Reed that his interests include "running too many miles on aging legs"--but it still had the force of revelation.

The protagonist of "Stride" is a long-distance runner who has been hijacked into a parallel world by a terrifying bird-like creature that wishes to sport with him unto death. This surface narrative differs from other Reed stories; but Phillip doesn't. All of Reed's protagonists are, in essence, long-distance runners (though only Phillip is literally one). The pulse at the heart of each of his protagonists is the obdurate slow pulse of a man or woman who runs miles or marathons, fruitlessly seeking a burn which will blaze the way to Eden.

Perpetual exile

The metaphysic of long-distance running--and almost certainly a lot of the hard truth--is that those who engage in the sport are obsessive loners: thin-bodied, stringy, intense, dourly humorless beings whose sexual impulses (which may be powerful) have almost certainly been diverted; men and women in a state of perpetual and uneasy exile from "normal" society; folk who have somehow been hijacked, conned out of paradise.

But it is no simple exile, not simply the exile of the displaced or the inadequate (though "The Utility Man" does treat its loner protagonist as being innately stale, as a man whose "insides" are simply unlikeable); almost invariably, the protagonists of the stories in The Dragons of Springplace long for something beyond the burn, some heart-melting epiphany on the other side of burn where Eden may be found: Eden being the taste of others.

They do not get there. In "The Dragons of Springplace," which may be the only weak story in the book, a savage epiphany is achieved when a man is transformed, at a peak of anguish, into a statue, ironically reversing Thorne Smith's The Night Life of the Gods (1931), where two lovers become statues at the point of orgasm.

The protagonist of "Waging Good," having pursued a course of vengeance with the astonishing attention span of the long-distance runner, endures a dark deadly pregnancy in order not to murder a planet. In "Chrysalis," one of three long stories set in planet-sized interstellar ships, a young woman, who--like the protagonist of Gene Wolfe's The Fifth Head of Cerberus (1972)--is a thinned and fined clone, escapes, through a slightly overcomplicated plot, from the anguish of being known only as the culmination of a set: her epiphany is to go to beings who don't know her.

Communion and betrayal

The other two tales--"The Remoras" and "Aeon's Child"--are set on a ship known only as the ship, and both feature immortals who truck down the centuries with an obduracy and attention span that have become familiar. Though one of them is rich and the other immensely powerful, they are both solitary; both seem to be visitors to the lives they lead, just as a long-distance runner may be nothing but a visitor to the lodgings he uses for purposes of raw recuperation; both seek communion with beings profoundly dissimilar to them; both are betrayed, as are all runners, at the finish line (promoters always cheat long-distance runners).

At heart, his worlds are just as solitudinous, just as likely to judder at the unseen touch of the confidence-men who cheat runners of their due of Eden, as any fantasia of justified paranoia by (say) Barry Malzberg, who could almost have written "Stride," and who is, by the way, renowned as a walker.

I bet Reed writes stories in his head as he runs.

All the same, in the end, there is the achievement of the surface. Reed's worlds do look different from above; his characters would not necessarily recognize each other on the street; and his stories do unpack differently as they progress, even though they tend to close on the same revelation: that the blaze beyond the burn is dust. And if there is an invariant solitude at the heart of each tale, a recurrent whiff of the grind of being, the reader does end up feeling that Reed's take on things is honorable. That it is good to know him.

A strong slow pulse drives these dragons.


John Clute is a writer, editor, critic and scholar of science fiction. He is the author of Science Fiction: The Illustrated Encyclopedia and co-editor of both The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction and The Encyclopedia of Fantasy, all Hugo Award winners. He is also a co-founder of the Hugo-winning British SF publication Interzone. His criticism and reviews have appeared in The New York Times, The Washington Post, Omni, The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction, and other places too numerous to list.




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